Richie McCaw's sentences

these are my Richie McCaw sick sentences Mrs O'Shea (my teacher) put on the class site we have to copy them but make them Sicker here they are.
The ball came towards Richie.

He jumped into the air.______ his team mates lunged Richie in the air snatching the ball from the air in mid air it was epic.

He held out his hands._______he lunged his hands into the sky.


He was excited.______Richie's eyes started to glisten his adrenaline went up and he laughed.


It was up to him.______Richie was the only one that could stop the other team from winning the fate of the teams were in his hands

my richie mccaw word art

this is my Richie McCaw Word Art I use word-art.com to create it I hope you like it

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From Marley

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show dont tell

show don't tell!

these are my Six Senses we have to change and a bad sentence into something good and i'm not telling you what's happening i'm showing you

thomas was stunned as he ran through the rain in the dusk of night, As he turned a corner he froze solid as a rock.

gene was furios as his fists clenched and steam poured out his ears and his skin turned red.

ron started to tremble his lips went from a smile to a frown his eyes filled up with water and before you know it you are in a pool of salty tears.

marley was overjoyed when he ran outside jumping into his fathers arms.

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sick scentances

These are my sick sentences there is only one though it is about a man (Sir Edmund Hillary) climbing everest

The man heaved up the mountain with thin shiney poles the sun was flaming on the little showing skin the sky was clear as a new glass pain he looked into the distance from the summit of the mountain
feeling proud of what he has accomplished.

My Sir Edmund Hillary timeline

This is my timeline of Sir Edmund Hillary I got the information from a site called biography.yourdictionary.com it was really usful here it is.

mr lemoncello drawing

This is a drawing of Mr limoncello Mr limoncello is from a book that we are reading in the class called escape from Mr lemoncello's library.

I think the book is really cool but I have already sent Reddit and seen the movie here is the picture of the picture that I made

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Genial.ly about climbing Mount Everest

this is my geneal.ly about Sir Edmund Hillary I did this because I have a post about Sir Edmund Hillary and I wanted to make this so that you could understand a bit more about him.

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climbing everest

This term we are learning about everyday Heroes each week we have a new Hero this week it is

sir Edmund Hillary we have to write a story about what it will be like for me to climb Mount Everest

with a beginning middle and end

Gazing up at the 8,848 metre high Mountain I pray that I wont die whilst climbing.

Gathering up my things I stumble over some white camouflaged rocks under the snow, Then I call my friend Vinnie and we embark on the great journey up the great Everist.

The 1st 2 hours of climbing were smooth because there were no brupt frozen over ice cuts and pressuring blizzards.

As night time fell we decided to camp in a small dome shaped cave and would carry on tomorrow.

 The next day at 4 am vinnie wakes me up with a horrible song, we had crusty Weetbix and milk for breakfast,

then we realized that there was a long journey ahead.
Today was much harder than any other day that we have been climbing.
We have been climbing for 3 days now I don't know if we can go further.
we now are a a few feet from the summit of the great Mt Everest now every step feels like a mile, Vinnie is weaker than ever
we are a so close now and we cant give up now.
We did it we climbed mt everest as I stand on top of the mountain I take a breath and scream, yeeeeeeeeeeees.
The end

my next post is a genial.ly click the buttons to read about Edmund and everist.
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(This is the mountain)

kakapo genial.ly

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